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| [Student] Haruto Souma (WIP) | |
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Posts : 101 Age : 26
| Subject: [Student] Haruto Souma (WIP) Tue Aug 12, 2014 1:01 am | |
| WIP (Inventory won't be changing soon dun worry) To clear anythin up all his forms and stuff uses mana so he isn't overpowered, and if he loses his rings he loses his power, yeah he may be able to do a simple fireball or force push :3 but that's it without his rings General Full Name: Haruto Souma Nickname(s): Haruto, Hardy had hard (no :/) Age: 17 (1 month til birthday ) Gender: Male Race: Human Appearance - Haruto:
Height: 170.1 cm Weight: 52 Kg ( estimated, still editing ) Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Brown Distinguishing Features: Wears specific jacket, wears a chain with a bunch of rings on left side and has scar on His arm Generally he is 170.1 cm tall and 48kg despite all the donuts he eats, also I will list all his forms and how he looks like on the bottom, he wears a black coat specifically and he usually wears running shoes like any normal person ( his suppose to be a Mage )
Also when affected by the flame dragon ring, the transformation goes like a dragon comes out of him, spins around him then turns into a magic circle then passes through harutp transforming to flame dragon etc., the standard styles just summon a magic circle where he points and he will "henshin" (transform)
The infinity is like the dragon style except haruto glows by massive amount if power then freezes in what seems like ice as the magic circle passed him and the dragon summons another magic cicle to complete the transformation
Personality
Likes:
- Donuts
- Adventuring
- Games
Dislikes:
- bugs
- being forced to fight
- slimy stuff
Fears:
- death by drowning
- having to choose something over another (yes I fear this irl to)
Haruto is sarcastic and friendly, he makes plenty of jokes but serious when in battle or test, likewise when in a tight spot he won't hesitate to choose his pals over his own life
As mentioned above he will take knives for his good pals and he WILL crack a joke when someone else does too, he will look at the good side of everything unless it's SUPER bad like the end of the word or a F
Also when he flicks his arm upward that means his ready for battle, sorta like a habit, but when in danger he will be cautious (duh) but his over reliance on magic can be his downfall, luckily he will always have magic rings to use
History
Haruto was a orphan since birth, one day at the age of 15 he was chosen by his tribe to be sacrificed to the god they worshiped, his body reacted strangely as it awakened his shadow form (#Arcke) and his entire tribe was decimated, glowing in his hand was a ring similar to his ring his dad gave him
He scowered the lands until he saw other cities and towns, and in one town someone was talking about a Mage academy to legally use magic, at first he was all confused as why you have to have a license but then he realized slowly why
After leaving said town, he was ahem"attempted robbery" from him but they didn't fight, at all, when he finally got up the nerve to apply a ring he used often stopped working
Statistics (This Field is Special. You are given 45 points to distribute as you see fit between all of your three status. Your limit, is that each stat must have at least 5 points in it. Once approved, we Staff will then convert those numbers to a E through SS ranked format.)Physical: 10 (Okay at physical stuff) Magical: 22 Intellectual:13(Gained through actual study and school, staff tell me when I get smarter, he also uses common sense, duh) Fighting Style: woo okay, so close, the way haruto fights varies to the way his form is made for, except flame as it's balanced, if his opponent gets the upper hand he will use spells, sometimes he will spam his spells but that quickly drains mana, also to accommodate for his lack of natural magic, he can use his Wizar weapon in human form as well as summon a iron blade! Miscellaneous - WIP :
Items of Significance: Mana/Rune rings, magic stones Position: Student Jokér finishers: Standard: Jokér Xtreme!
Last edited by Akreious on Wed Aug 27, 2014 8:19 am; edited 1 time in total | |
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| Subject: Re: [Student] Haruto Souma (WIP) Sat Aug 16, 2014 6:45 pm | |
| Hello Mr. Akreious! My name is Narry, and I'll be grading, and possibly approving, your Student-Class Application. You actually have quite the amount of work to do. They're mostly questions of my own for you that will try to clear up somethings. Other things, are items that are out of place or just plain don't belong in the Character Application. If you have any questions, concerns, or thing I made a mistake, please Private Message me, or additionally you can ask me on the Cbox at your preference. - Inventory:
I notice that you have an 'Inventory' at the very top of your application. We've included something similar to this in the bottom of the App, titled 'Items of Significance'. If you could edit this and move it to that portion of the Application, that would be swell~ I also noticed that you've got a couple of highlighted items in it. I have to ask: are these Items going to effect your RP at all? As in, do they have their own effects that change something within the RP? Do they power you up or weaken you somehow? If any of the above are true, then i'm afraid you'll have to erase that. What you have described is something along the lines of a Spell, or an Alchemy Formula. Or, possibly, even a combination of the two. Don't get me wrong, it is possible to do it. But it can't be registered during your Character Application. Even if you do register it after your App is approved, it could possibly be a high ranking spell. And if that's the case, it will be either extremely hard to obtain, very expensive, or just not safe to use at all with your current Student-Class Stats. It could also be a Unique Ability, instead of a Spell or Alchemy Formula alone, but even then, we would require the Rings to be registered as Alchemy Formulas...
- Appearance:
You're apperance is fine, so long as you remember that this transformation(s) he goes through, are the result of a spell, and must be registered separately.
- Appearance:
- Akreious wrote:
- ...of the word or a F
Did your sentence get cut off? It was in your Personality Description =O And, once more, the magic rings will have to be registered separately. Sorry if I sound like a broken record...
- Stats:
Favorite part of the app =D Your current layout of your points would give you stats of:
- Physical: D
- Magical: C (+2)
- Intellectual: D (+3)
You are welcome to change these, so long as you alert me to the edits and it's not passed the point where your application is approved.
- Fighting Style:
This will need some work. You're fighting style is based around your Forms (which have yet to be registered correctly, but that's common at this point for everybody). The problem, is we don't know if you plan to make your Forms a Unique Ability + Alchemy Formula; or just simple Alchemy Formulas and/or Spells.
(And be sure to tell us more about that Iron Blade ;D Does it have powers of it's own? What happens to it when it appears? Disappears? What happens to it when it does disappear? (I'm assuming that you can summon and vanquish it at will))
- Forms:
You've got another big addition to your Application, but this one is larger and at the end.
I won't answer any questions in it quite yet, cuz it seems to be that it's part of these Forms you have. Unfortunately, this makes more work for you, as this cannot remain in the Application. If it has to deal with your Forms, you'll have to put this huge addition in with your registration of these Forms (Either as Unique Abilities + Alchemy Formulas; or Alchemy Formulas and/or Spells.)
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