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| [Student] Yeote Estuelmon "Shadow" | |
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Shadow Student
Posts : 77
| Subject: [Student] Yeote Estuelmon "Shadow" Wed Oct 08, 2014 12:18 am | |
| General Full Name: Yeote Estuelmon Nickname(s): Shadow, Mirage. Age: 17 Gender: Male Race: Twilight Human Appearance - Image:
Height: 1.8m or 5'10" Weight: 52kg or 115lb Eye Color: Light grey Hair Color: Grey Distinguishing Features: Feint glow about him in dawn/dusk lighting settings and when exposed to sub-red lights. Has either a body or a shadow at once, but not both at the same time. [Yeote Estuelmon, appears to be a normal and thin teenager. He has messy grey hair on his head that is short enough to not hid his face. His skin is fair in tone. Overall he looks like a normal human unless you gaze into his smoky eyes where you would start to get the startling strange sensation of being sucked into a void.
He dresses to what he has learned from humans for the most part. He wears dark pants and white tee shirt and black jacket in most non hostile situations. In combat he wears a tight, but not fully form fitting, full garb from his native dressing with light chain mill underneath. Some people relate to a thing called "ninja" would wear.
Normal form:Just your normal state of existence. Minus a shadow.
Shadow form: When Mirage takes on this form he becomes what appears to be a body less shadow. This Shadow form can interact with other shadows. However all normal objects are unable to interact with him. Not limited to walls he can move freely from floor to wall or ceiling to walls and when on the floor he has a point of origin that moves and this is where his feet are.]
Personality
Likes:
- Messing with people
- Puzzles
- Friends
- Moonlit nights
- People accepting him
- Learning.
Dislikes:
- Hostilities
- Being Scared
- Lies
- Rain
- Large moving mechanics.
Fears:
- Being outcast
- Fire
- Birds.
[Yeote is a bit different from the humans that surround him, due to the different culture he grew up in. One of the dominate things about his is his curiosity. He is often sticking his nose in one place or another and this sometimes lands him in trouble. When combined with his lack of knowledge of some customs he occasionally does some rather, well, interesting things, like going into the women's bathroom, because he does not know that he should not do things like that.
When it comes to others he is not very shy in walking up to a random person and talking to them. He is at most a friendly person and believes that he is equal to "normal" humans. While he does think they are a little silly he still respects them and hopes that they will do the same to him. He is willing to come to the aid of anyone who requests it and can be a little bit of stalker to anyone he has grown attached to, but he means it as a friendly jester, not a creepy one.
A come past time of his is to people watch. He likes to go somewhere and then disappear from sight and just watch people interact with each other and go on in their lives. He also likes to play funny tricks on others with magic or his shadow form but tries to keeps his jokes harmless. When he is not joking around or watching people he has a passion for puzzles, strategy, and both normal and shadow obstacle courses.
But Yeote, while it can be hard to see sometimes, has a very serious side. In combat or a not safe situation all jokes stops with him and he expects the same, but the occasional joke is fine by him. He takes requests seriously, and has trouble picking up sarcasm. If you tell him to do something within reason, he most likely will do it. If he likes you he might even do something outside of reason, so be careful when teasing him...
He is also very unknowing about humans and history. This means that he knows no famous people nor many notable events. He treats all people the same from the start and will help anyone in need. He holds honor very highly.
Due to his lonely childhood with out any child friends he is quick to bond to other people. Friendship and many other feelings, including love and hate, are alien to him and he can have trouble identifying his own emotions. He is trusting, but holds grudges and first impressions very strongly.]
History
[Yeote Estuelmon's story begins in a world that is in constant twilight form a different sun, made from different things and gasses, but past this, it was much like our own. It was a living planet filled with different creatures and plants and things. You could see this place, though only for an instant at twilight. It was a world of peace, and wonders; so very close to our own, and the true home of the twilight people. Or so the stories told.
Yeote Estuelmon listened to these stories in his small village of just twilight people and these brought him joy in hearing them. He was your normal kid in the village, the only one in fact that the village had had in a long time. Children were a rare thing, and many couples would never have one. But his parents were blessed enough to be able to rise a healthy young boy. This boy was loved by the entire community and was a little spoiled, never forcing him to grow up.
When he reached the right age he started getting an education in his clan's magic. This was an informal education but he was able to get basic magic down and he was also taught how to change to the shadow form and back and quickly mastered it, or at least thought he was good at it. He was also taught medical skills, some Herbology, along with some survivalist skills that have been taught in the clan for century.
He started to explore out into the woods and found some old ruins of what could have been a fort of some kind. While the place was empty and run down, but he found quite something fun to do with it. At different times of day the lighting would change and the different areas of the place would accessible if he used his shadow from and used the shadows of the ruins to climb like it was an obstacle course. One day he manged to work his way into one of the towers. He started to explore and disturbed a flock of birds. The birds packed and took off to escape, and he was in the way. The entire flock tried to fly past him and many hit him in their flight to escape. In his eyes the birds attacked him on purpose and so he is slightly afraid whenever a bird gets too close to him.
One time when he was changing form at just the right moment that a certain scenario occurred and he found himself in a different, gold and amber colored world. The Twilight world. But it was only for a few seconds before it all faded, like sweet summer dream. When he tried to tell others about it they mostly rolled their eyes or simply did not believe him. However, one person did, the elder of the group.
The elder was a rather old man, even by twilight men's age, and when Yeote told him his story he simply waved him into his house and showed him a glowing stone. The twilight stone. He had managed to grab it before he was forced out of the twilight world. He gave it to the young boy and sent him to where he had learned to wield magic himself, the Mage Academy, so that Yeote could get a formal and more professorial education and also so he could discover, for both of them, how to reach the twilight world.
Statistics
Physical: 12 Magical: 16 Intellectual: 17
Fighting Style: When fighting by himself, Yeote takes to being a very cautious fighter and tries to maintain distance at all costs. He likes to sit out of range of his target and look for patterns, weakness, or anything he could use against it before he strikes. If he can he will use the surronding to his aid. He mixes up his attacks and spells to help prevent him making patterns. He is not afraid to run if the going gets bad. If he must fight at close quarters he will use his Bo-Shuriken as a knife until he can get away. He also has a few martial skills he can employ.
When fighting with others he will fall into a more supportive role. He will stay close to his teammates and use his skills to help out the best he can. He will charge strait into danger if needed to rescue a comrade in need. He will not run, and if the team runs he will be the last one to go. He can almost always be counted on to have your back, and you will need to make sure to watch his for him.
Yeote's version of an adrenalin rush works a little different from the normal person. With the normal human gets a powerful boast that dulls the mind when simply in a very stressful situation, Yeote's will only activate when he is seriously wounded. This lets his mind work as normal and he gets one surge of full mussel capabilities and pain dulling. While he can move at astonishing speeds and hit much harder far past his own limits, the used mussels will literally rip themselves apart from the power he is exerting for they can not sustain that kind of force being used.. He will need medical attention to restore the torn mussels.
Miscellaneous
- Other:
Cbox Name: Shadow Other Characters: none
Items of Significance:
Twilight Stone- A strange shard that he holds very dear. It is a complete mystery in its origin and composure. Is somehow connected to the twilight zone. If this was lost bad things would happen. If someone stole this... let us just say it would be much worse.
Eclipse shard- A relic that he can be spotted using during eclipses. Its exact function is unknown.
Position: Student
Last edited by Shadow on Sat Nov 01, 2014 7:01 pm; edited 11 times in total | |
| | | Arkian Aviskus Student
Posts : 202
| Subject: Re: [Student] Yeote Estuelmon "Shadow" Thu Oct 09, 2014 12:01 pm | |
| Hello there, Arkian here, Moderator in training. I'll be reviewing your student-application along with Admins: Narry and Overlord Midnight. - "The Review:
Format: Actually, it would be nice to have this a proper layout, kind of like this: (Link) This is whereby 'bullets' are used, as well things are placed outside the box, these internal boxes being used for lengthy information. Stats: Physical: 12 (Rank C) Magical: 16 (Rank C) Intellectual: 17 (Rank C) Position as a Student. This is set using a guide for staff. You may change this before your character is created or if thou has increased stats via roleplaying. As for a small mention: "like going into the women's bathroom." I see I'm already going to love this character, and if so, my bad luck might somehow end up with me joining him, usually from falling in from the roof, that's a classic, hehe~~~
Well, you can feel free to change anything, but it's recommended that you get your application into the proper format for acceptance. | |
| | | Almanac Administrator
Posts : 214 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: [Student] Yeote Estuelmon "Shadow" Thu Oct 09, 2014 2:30 pm | |
| Hello Mr. Shadow! As my associate Arkian has informed you, I'll be assisting him in grading your Student-Class Application today. - Status:
i'm okay with the placement of your 45 points, and Arkian did a good job determining your letters. I'm just going to add the Plus Numbers to them:
Physical: C Magical: C (+5) Intellectual: C (+7)
I don't know if Arkian intentionally left them out or not, but I'll throw them up there for consideration. Midnight should be able to decide what to do if he grades.)
(p.s. I say 'if he grades', because Midnight is currently unable to get to a Computer. He can, but he does not get the chance often. Until his own Desktop has been repaired, he's limited to his cell phone.) | |
| | | Shadow Student
Posts : 77
| Subject: Re: [Student] Yeote Estuelmon "Shadow" Fri Oct 10, 2014 2:22 pm | |
| I did a little changing to make it slightly better and explain some things. Changes follow. Changed areas are red. - Changes:
Twilight Human: A mysterious race that has been around about two thousand years. Belied to be from a different dimension, light properties interact differently with these strange people rendering them without shadows, or by using some strange power, without a body and in the shadow world. They age progressively slower as the years go by but it is not noticeable until around twenty years old; typically life span is around two hundred years. For unknown reasons, having children is difficult for the Twilight race.
In combat he wears a tight, but not fully form fitting garb from his native dressing with light chain mill underneath. Some people relate to a thing called "ninja" would wear.
When combined with his lack of knowledge of some customs he occasionally does some rather, well, interesting things, like going into the women's bathroom, because he does not know that he should not do things like that.
He started to explore out into the woods and found some old ruins of what could have been a fort of some kind. While the place was empty and run down, but he found quite something fun to do with it. At different times of day the lighting would change and the different areas of the place would accessible if he used his shadow from and used the shadows of the ruins to climb like it was an obstacle course. One day he manged to work his way into one of the towers. He started to explore and disturbed a flock of birds. The birds packed and took off to escape, and he was in the way. The entire flock tried to fly past him and many hit him in their flight to escape. In his eyes the birds attacked him on purpose and so he is slightly afraid whenever a bird gets too close to him.
When he reached the right age he started getting an education in his clan's magic. This was an informal education but he was able to get basic magic down and he was also taught how to change to the shadow form and back and quickly mastered it, or at least thought he was good at it.
He gave it to the young boy and sent him to where he had learned to wield magic himself, the Mage Academy, so that Yeote could get a formal and more professorial education and also so he could discover, for both of them, how to reach the twilight world.
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| | | Almanac Administrator
Posts : 214 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: [Student] Yeote Estuelmon "Shadow" Sat Oct 11, 2014 10:47 pm | |
| Okay, just one more thing before Approval, and it's more along the lines of informing you first.
By the way you've introduced this race and set them up, and how Mage Academy works, well known races tend to have these powers that come with them. For example, a Vampire may not like the sun and may or may not need to feed on blood. And werewolves may or may not have the ability to transform into a wolf-like creature and may or may not have enhanced senses.
These powers and attributes are to be expected, because they are well known races and can, and have, been portrayed in a number of different ways.
Twilight Humans don't fall under this category. Now, while that's not a bad thing (depending on your point-of-view) this means that your race's ability to change form into a shadow and back isn't well known (and possibly, not done enough to be common knowledge).
So, what i'm saying is, you can't turn into a shadow and back... yet. You can, but it has to be registered differently. (I think i said something about this in the Cbox...?), but this unique trait would need to be listed as a 'Unique Ability', or at the very least, would need to be registered as a Spell or Alchemy Matrix, or both.
If it's a Unique Ability, then it can be registered and approved fairly simply. If, for whatever reason you like, you decide to register it as a Spell and/or Alchemy Formula, then it may not have such an easy time getting to Approval (seeing as your Character is a Students, and Students aren't permitted to have high level spells/abilities/etc.)
If you understand all of this, or if you don't, or if you have something to say or question us about, please respond to this Post. | |
| | | Shadow Student
Posts : 77
| Subject: Re: [Student] Yeote Estuelmon "Shadow" Sun Oct 12, 2014 1:15 am | |
| Makes good sense to me, so i have dropped the Description i had of the twilight race. I plan on having his shadow form change thing as an unique ability so... yep. I think i am good now...? | |
| | | Arkian Aviskus Student
Posts : 202
| Subject: Re: [Student] Yeote Estuelmon "Shadow" Sun Oct 12, 2014 1:50 am | |
| Well, we'll give approval if everything seems to match-up to our character guidelines. So far, from what I'm reviewing, I'd say he's okay to go, as Narry said and you agreed to, his unique ability will be accepted given that it's fair and sufficiently detailed. | |
| | | Almanac Administrator
Posts : 214 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: [Student] Yeote Estuelmon "Shadow" Sun Oct 12, 2014 2:56 pm | |
| Yes, yes, all is well, all is right, and I'm proud to give my own support for this application.
Mr. Shadow; you have support from our Head Moderator as well as myself, the Head Admin. And unless some other staff member happens across this application and sees something drastically out of order, this application is APPROVED.
Welcome to Mage Academy
(Your Weapon, Spells, and the like can now be approved as well, feel free to create whatever you want.) | |
| | | Shadow Student
Posts : 77
| Subject: Re: [Student] Yeote Estuelmon "Shadow" Sat Nov 01, 2014 7:02 pm | |
| Remake completed, awaiting re-approval. | |
| | | Almanac Administrator
Posts : 214 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: [Student] Yeote Estuelmon "Shadow" Sat Nov 01, 2014 7:34 pm | |
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