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| [Staff] Scarlett Amber | |
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Lasira Angel
Posts : 83 Age : 28
| Subject: [Staff] Scarlett Amber Fri Aug 02, 2013 2:31 am | |
| General Full Name: Scarlett Amber Nickname(s): Amber (her preferred name) Age: 25 (though she looks 18) Gender: Female Race: Feline-Hybrid Appearance - Image:
Height: 5’7” Weight: 160 lbs Eye Color: Ocean Blue Hair Color: Snowy White Distinguishing Features:
- Spoiler:
One thing people don’t entirely notice when looking at her; her eyes can change color. It’s not a full on change of color from blue to say red, but it’s a subtle change from blue to maybe green or hazel. And if she’s frustrated, maybe amber. But they’re always changing colors, mostly because of her moods changing like anyone else’ around her.
As eyes are like windows to a person’s soul, her’s are windows to her mood and personality. Those that know her best, might pick up on how her moods and eye colors match perfectly. Of course, no one actually knows her well enough to distinguish that; they mostly just get transfixed on watching her eyes change from their normal happy blue to frustrated and sometimes angry amber.
Another feature, though more noticeable, would be her birthmark. She has had multiple people ask her if it was just a tattoo, the answer always being ‘no.’ Her birthmark is that which was “programmed” into her DNA as she was in the test tube being “grown.” The birthmark is in the shape of small whiskers on her face, which at times can look like marks she made herself because they have a small pinkish (scar-like) hue to them.
When she was younger, the scientists enjoyed making fun of her and poking at her cheeks, watching the colors of the whiskers change. And they’d even watch her eyes, just to make sure she was angry enough to give a small spark of frustration. Even though they were poking at her, they always made sure to diagnose and enter all they found out about her, including her mood changes and personality quirks.
Normally with a skip in her step and a smile on her face, anyone who saw her walking down the hallways would probably want to either smile and wave or strike up a conversation with her. She likes to keep a friendly outward appearance for anyone needing someone to talk to. In an outward way like a therapist would, but with the feeling of an understanding and caring friend. She likes keeping those around her at peace and happy, just like she is with a smile and nod or wave in their direction.
As for physical appearance, the biggest thing she likes to wear, to stand out from everyone, would have to be her bright lowcut tanktop. It’s about the first thing ANYONE sees when speaking with her; even when it’s hiding under her black fishnet hoodie. But that’s just her shirt that most people will see. She also likes to wear black/purple/white shorts because she likes the maneuverability they can give her when she’s teaching. As for her shoes, no matter what she’s wearing, she will always stick with her black combat boots; because they’re sturdy and she likes being able to break things with them..
Of course that’s her normal, everyday wear/. When she’s not teaching, or must be in her office/out for professional errands, she will wear a white blouse with a black tie, and a small jacket. Then will wear her infamous black and red skirt that flips up at the end, right in the middle of her thighs. And she’ll still be wearing her combat boots for the security purposes. But she’ll also wear something cute, like a small necklace or some earrings to make her seem, not so frightening and intimidating to be near.
Another thing about her that most people notice right off the bat, would be her ears and tail. She had them grown on her when she was still in the test tube, and that gives anyone who looks at her a reason to think of her as a freak or, inhuman being; or at least that’s what the scientists would tell her. Her black and red tipped ears and tail are always swishing and moving around in her moods, especially when she’s happy. This helps people understand her moods a little bit easier because they can actually see it physically, than having to look right into her eyes to understand (something she’s not overly fond of because of the….”family” she knew)
Personality
colors curiosity people food sleep training her sister
her sleep being disrupted needles noise isolation closed spaces her sister
scientists/doctors hooks/needles/surgical tools everyone she knows and cares about dying abandonment
Like everyone in the world, she has two personalities; the “customer service” or “take care of others that don’t know her” personality, and the “I know you, and you know how I am” personality. One she uses almost all the time, and the other is a rare personality people can’t help but tilt their heads at in confusion and curiosity. Though of course, not that many people know her well enough to gauge the difference between the two personalities; they sometimes meld together into one as she can’t help but act both ways towards everyone in the Academy.
Her most normal personality everyone sees in her, would be her “customer service” personality. The one where she always has a smile on her face, and will have a soft spoken voice that people won’t be afraid to listen to. She mostly uses this to the younger students, and towards business people she must talk with in order to set things right again. Of course, those that know her, and know that she’s only putting on a fake personality, always laugh at her as she simply can’t do anything with the way she was taught.
Then there’s her normal “I don’t care how I act around you” personality. This is just her being herself around her sister, and the headmaster mostly. Because they’ve known her the longest, she can’t really hide from them. Her voice becomes a bit louder and stronger than when she’s speaking with students, and her posture will change from a grown woman, to a young woman who looks like she’s a big child. She also ends up being curious about every little thing, and will childishly ask about whatever piques her interest.
History
An egg, and a test tube. The egg, always inside, never to come out until it was ready. Always waiting and growing in size; living and breathing. Inside was not just an animal; it was more than that. It was a small, little girl. That little girl went by the name; SCARLETT.
She was always small for her age; never quite big enough to hang with the kids her age because they were afraid. Oh, they weren’t afraid of her being hurt. Oh no; they were afraid of her losing control. Instead of being allowed to have friends and a normal life, she was stuck in an isolated lab area, alone to herself. She learned, and she learned fast; to fight and survive on her own.
The ones to take care of her never wanted her around. They always tried hurting her, abusing her, putting her down until she couldn’t get back up. Always so scared of being alone with them. She never knew the strength she had to stand up for herself until that day came. The day where she finally had left her prison:
She was 10 at the time; yet had the physical appearance of a 5 year old. She couldn’t think of what to do whenever those who wanted to harm her would do so. They only taught her the basics of survival; Fight or Flight. And they always told her to pick Flight; because they were scared of her. They knew what her potential was, and if anyone but them were to find out about it; everything would shatter.
One day though, as she was eating her stale bread and moldy corn, someone walked up to her. She didn’t know who they were; she didn’t recognize the footsteps. They had simply smiled kindly to her, and held out a hand. What caught her by surprise was how her own small hand found its place in theirs, without so much of a blink of an eye. For once in her small life, she felt safe.
And from that moment on she felt safe. She never thought of them again, never dreamed that she would end up in a place she would deem safe from humans. Of course she was technically once, but with her mutation and test experimentations, she could hardly say she was human anymore. Some were frightened of her, some were nice to her, and some just didn’t care either way (mostly because they just didn’t know her). And what made everything better for her; she was able to talk with those her age.
From then on, she focused on her skills. She honed what abilities she had and made them better than what she could have dreamed in the cell she lived in. She became a better combat specialist, trying her best to master in close-ranged combat skills; and she trained in weapons, though her favorites were always either sai, or her own two hands which could change into cat-claws. And as she grew older, she learned to care for others, and take care of them if and when they needed it; just like what the person who took her away from the lab said she would do once she was ready.
Statistics
Physical: 16 Magical: 12 Intellectual: 17
Fighting Style:
- Spoiler:
The most noticeable thing Amber likes to do when fighting, is use her “claws and teeth” or fight dirty, like some people say. But it’s not entirely her fault because of the way she was “raised.” She was always taught to use her abilities, and she never once thought of anything else except her claws and teeth for battle. So her first instinct when in battle, is to allow her feline mutation to take over, allowing her teeth and claws to elongate and strengthen for battle. Of course, if she’s just starting out fighting, it will only drain some of her energy because of the concentration and exertion, but if she’s been fighting quite a bit, then it might take more.
Of course, when people say she can’t fight the way she’s completely used to, she goes for the next best thing she has; which is her Sai strapped tightly to her back at all times. She uses this differently than her natural gifts though, because she had to train with these when she started at the academy at the age of 10. Over the years of training, she has been able to flip her Sai off her back in a matter of seconds and use them to her advantage, like an extension of her arms. She uses them along with her close combat ranging experience, and is able to get close to her opponent, and wield them close to her body. Just like she would if she were to use her claws.
Miscellaneous
- Other:
Cbox Name: Angels Heart Other Characters:
Items of Significance:
Position: Teacher/Dean of Students; teaches close-ranged combat
Last edited by Angels Heart on Sat Oct 25, 2014 10:14 pm; edited 4 times in total | |
| | | Almanac Administrator
Posts : 214 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: [Staff] Scarlett Amber Sun Sep 21, 2014 6:13 pm | |
| Hello there Ms. Angel. My name is Narry and I'll be grading your Teacher-Class Application today. You may need some extra work~ - Appearance:
You're actually missing a paragraph here. Your length is fine, and if you just hit the Enter Button a few times between every five sentences, you'll be meeting the requirements in this area.
That is to say, as you are a Teacher, you are required to have a better looking and more informative Application. This isn't really stated anywhere, but putting extra information in some places really can boost your chances of getting approval (and faster as well).
- Personality:
You meet minimum requirements here, but if you want to put an extra paragraph in (if you can think of anything) it looks really good when Approval starts)
- History:
You actually have a good number of Paragraphs in here, and you explain your Character's whole life. This needs no improvement, but if you feel like you want to add something, you may (just let us know).
- Stats:
With the placement of your Status points, and your position as Teacher, your stats come out to:
Physical: B (+7) Magical: C (+30) Intellectual: A
This is soled by finding your Stats as a Student, and then upgrading them to be Teacher-Class. If you have any questions, let me know.
- Fighting Style:
We might actually need a bit more from here. Normally, this would be okay for a Student-Class Application, but as a teacher, you have more power and more responsibility. So, you'll have to give us some more concerning your Fighting Style. Feel free to look at any of the [url=]approved Applications[/url], or this Example Application if you need any ideas or hints. Additionally, you can ask us through PM or on the Mage Academy Skype Group Chat.
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| | | Midnight Administrator
Posts : 66 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: [Staff] Scarlett Amber Sun Sep 21, 2014 7:08 pm | |
| Hello! My name is Midnight and I will also be grading this Teacher-Class application as a second Admin for approval. - Appearance:
To start off, I personally wasn't to impressed with the distinguishing features portion of the application. I feel like it could've used a little more detail involving what you already put down. Like exactly what colors are her tail and ears, and is their a specific shape the scar has or is it just a single straight cut?
- Personality:
Personality is... okay. It could use a little more details. Like what are her morals? Does she have a specific philosophy on life?
Also you need to separate it into distinct paragraphs.
- History:
Your history is pretty decent, and is fine as is. Though an extra paragraph or two may help the grading process a bit more.
- Fighting Style:
Honestly, Naro pretty much covered everything that should've been said here except for a few other details I wish to point out. - Quote :
- She is able to see a person's attack pattern if the opponent is standing directly in front of her, though her attacks don't always cooperate with he way her brain spots and comprehends the fighting style of another person.
This is both vague and potentially overpowered so you're going to have to explain better exactly what happens.
Exactly what do you mean. Do you literally have the ability to see their movements before they make them, or does you understand what they're gonna do the moment they actually do it, but there's a limit as to how powerful they are and how fast they work.
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| | | Lasira Angel
Posts : 83 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: [Staff] Scarlett Amber Sat Oct 25, 2014 10:15 pm | |
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| | | Almanac Administrator
Posts : 214 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: [Staff] Scarlett Amber Sun Oct 26, 2014 12:40 am | |
| I take back what I said! As Arkian will be missing for the Weekend, I'll put up my own Grading post first! Mid's reasons are... unknown as of late, but I suspect he's still experiencing computer problems. So, without further ado, this is your first grading post: - Statistics:
Your stats for a Staff would be:
Physical: A (+40) Magical: B (+10) Intellectual: S
These calculations were found by finding your statistics as a student, and then, increasing them to the level of a Staff-class being.
If you find that these calculations are too low, or if your nice enough, too high, please comment on it and let us know your feelings on this. Depending on what reasons you give us, we may or may not alter the stats above.
Additionally, you are welcome to change your placement of the 45 points at any time before your application is fully supported and Approved.
- Fighting Style:
She has a very animistic fighting style (at least, that's what I picked up). But, you're short in length. Do you think you could possibly add about one, most likely two paragraphs in for us? Try to outline aspects of herself. Her Offensive style, her Defensive style, how she may use Magical Abilities to fight, the individual aspects of her body such as Strength, Speed, Relfexes, Durability.
If you can add in a paragraph for each of those things I listed, we wouldn't have to worry about your Fighting Style at all.
- Personality:
This looks like an... acceptable length, but if you think that you can come up with a few more things, could you possibly add in another paragraph? Or half of one? Things like specific people she may act around (or more then just one specific person). What would she do if she saw somebody she liked? What would she do if she was in front of the Headmaster? Another Staff member? If she had to take a leadership position, what would she do? Who would she trust with her deepest secrets, if anybody? Things like that.
Everything else that I'm seeing looks okay. Your appearance is well detailed and thought out, and your History is just the same. I wish you luck my friend! And if you have any questions at all, feel free to contat myself or, you could try to find what you need in the Rules & Guidelines forum. | |
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